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This Feeling

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This feeling's coming up again.

Why can't I hold it back?

What is this pain I feel?

Where are these tears I lack?

Why should I hold back now?

My chances are still so close.

What is my point of fear?

Who do I turn to now?

Where is my center emotion?


Why does this feel so near?

I don't understand what's happening.

My body is so confused.

I don't know what to do.

Is there some way of help?

I need to survive now.

Please hold me closer.

The pain that I feel.

This hurt coming from inside.

I don't understand it.

Please make it heal.

Tell me what is right.

Please tell me what is wrong.

I need to find my answers.

It all starts out like this.

Tell me how it should differ.

How are you oh so special?

And what really should I fear?

Tell me how to be quiet.

How do I shut my mouth?

Show me a new beginning.

Try not to stab me in the back.

Show me the way to your world.

I'll show you mine.

How do you know so much?

Why is this happening again?

What are the rules I live under?

Who rules over me now?

How should I be controlled?

Who lives over me?
Who lives over me?
This was hard to find a category for, especially since I really don't know what it is. These things just kind of came to me and I thought I should write them down.
Enjoy :)


This is actually supposed to be sung as a rap. It was supposed to be a song and then this is what came out of it. Couldn't figure out what I wanted the main chorus to be and all that, but I'd say this is actually one of my good pieces. I'm very proud of this, and I'm working on more. :)
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

We all get confused now and then in our lives but it happens for a reason so that when we figure it all out and what might have seem to be bad back then, it’s actually really good now. A friend of mine once told me, “I know it seems hard now and it is but trust me dear, in the end, you’ll find something better than what is going on now.” I don’t know if he’s right or not yet. I’m still figuring things out myself.

Sometimes letting go might be the easier way out in the long-term of it. There seems to be some sort of internal struggle going on here where the mind wants one thing and the heart, another. It’s as if the speaker is living in two different lives at the same time. Or an easier way to put it, the one where an angel and a devil are on each of your shoulders. It’s hard but I hope you get things solved out. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>